Welcome to my writing laboratory. "Words are sacred. They deserve respect. If you get the right ones in the right order, you can nudge the world a little."—Tom Stoppard, playwright
Friday, March 02, 2007
Arrggh! What is this?
So I'm flipping through this morning's Plain Dealer when I turn to the op-ed page and one line screams out at me in flashing neon. A sentence in the lead editorial on Mayor Frank Jackson's State of the City address begins:"It has got assets...". Ugh! At the very least this is clumsy language. Didn't anyone read this aloud before printing?